First Draft

This is our first draft of our film opening.

Looking at this we could see that the production company needs to be changed as it looks like part of the film, titles need to be longer, the title of the film needs to be bigger and moved to the bottom of the screen and that one of the titles was not white like all the others.














After these changes have been made we should have a complete final edit of our film opening.

Summary Of Our Film

If our opening was made into an actual film we decided that the premises would be that our protagonist is very passionate about football but is incredibly rubbish at it. She is a massive Arsenal fan and attends all their games to support them. The opening shows exactly how passionate about the sport she is. The film will the continue to show the harsh reality she has to face to pursue her dream of ever becoming a professional player from having to improve her skills, her parents discouragement and the negativity surrounding women footballers. However, when just about everyone has given up on her and she has almost given up on herself she goes to the stadium for her final time as she prepares to leave her childish dream behind her. It's here that she meets Dara O'Briain again and he gives her the encouragement she needs to go on pursuing a dream linked with football. It then ends with an Arsenal game, commentated by the protagonist.